Your analysis is good and you show an understanding of conventions of the thriller; a bit more needed on thriller openings and what elements are used. Audience research needs posting as does your prelim. Overall, aim to use a wider range of ICT / presentational devices to stop being over reliant on text.
Your analysis is good and you show an understanding of conventions of the thriller; a bit more needed on thriller openings and what elements are used. Audience research needs posting as does your prelim. Overall, aim to use a wider range of ICT / presentational devices to stop being over reliant on text.
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